I like how you established the violent nature of your world in such a short amount of time. It really set the expectation for me that this isn’t going to be a normal detective novel.
And the added humor with the ‘you look like God makes mistakes’ line! 🤌🏽👏🏽👏🏽
I’m glad you enjoyed it brudda!!! I cannot wait! For the your horror contribution tomorrow. Literally salivating. Chapter 2 for this one drops next week and we get a hint at the twist!!!
FICTION IS CULTURE! Fuck yeah.
I’m glad you enjoyed it!!!!! Unrelated, but GONZO GIRL is probably the sickest handle I’ve seen on Substack. Major kudos!
I'm not surprised at all that dirty noir fits you like a glove, tipped with cigarette burns. I'm enjoying this so far!
Spreading the love for Pablo was kind of you, thank you.
I’m glad you enjoyed it! That’s always the best compliment for sure
Hell yeah!
I like how you established the violent nature of your world in such a short amount of time. It really set the expectation for me that this isn’t going to be a normal detective novel.
And the added humor with the ‘you look like God makes mistakes’ line! 🤌🏽👏🏽👏🏽
I’m glad you enjoyed it brudda!!! I cannot wait! For the your horror contribution tomorrow. Literally salivating. Chapter 2 for this one drops next week and we get a hint at the twist!!!
I'm writing something sorta noir-y right now, too. Great start!
Nice! Is it coming out soon?
No, probably not until July or August. I'm going to write the entire serial (or at least most of it) before I start publishing it.
Maybe that would have been the better way to release a serial! Oh well, we’re in it now.
I have no idea--this is my first one! I might change my mind and start releasing them as I go. haha
This is dope, my dude!
I appreciate you taking this initiative. It's a cool way to flip it, and I agree with MP, noir fits you.