So entertaining to read the whole way through! And you went in a direction I’ve always wanted to see from this kind of story, which is what life looks like inside an absolute trash pile of a person.
I couldn’t agree with you more! I think I write in one of the most chaotic ways possible 😂
Let me set the scene.
Shitty horror movie, YouTube video, keyboard and my ideas book. I get up probably 50 times in the middle of the story and eventually manage to smash something together.
The it’s a small break and I edit. Editing is really the only place I really focus because I try and break it down line by line.
The rest is pure mess. Your shits banging though so whatever you’re doing is working.
I appreciate it brudda! It was a blast. I saw the prompt right after watching Inner Space and was like “bingo”. I always try and have fun with these stories when I put them together, because if not they feel stiff and make you want to rip your dick off 🤷🏽♂️
So entertaining to read the whole way through! And you went in a direction I’ve always wanted to see from this kind of story, which is what life looks like inside an absolute trash pile of a person.
I’m glad you liked it! Yours was a blast
Thanks, Drew!
This was fun for you to write and it comes through, it has a good energy carrying throughout the piece.
I couldn’t agree with you more! I think I write in one of the most chaotic ways possible 😂
Let me set the scene.
Shitty horror movie, YouTube video, keyboard and my ideas book. I get up probably 50 times in the middle of the story and eventually manage to smash something together.
The it’s a small break and I edit. Editing is really the only place I really focus because I try and break it down line by line.
The rest is pure mess. Your shits banging though so whatever you’re doing is working.
We’re not that off in process, one thing here and there but for the most part we’re on the same page 😂
I appreciate it brudda! It was a blast. I saw the prompt right after watching Inner Space and was like “bingo”. I always try and have fun with these stories when I put them together, because if not they feel stiff and make you want to rip your dick off 🤷🏽♂️
Right there with ya’.
Sitting still is torture enough, gotta make that time as enjoyable as possible.
As someone that can’t be still, writing is both a curse and a blessing.
It’s probably helped more than not to keep my dick from being ripped, can tell you that much.
Nice! In my mind's eye I imagine the characters as a more haggard version of the people from the Cells at Work anime
I haven’t see that one yet. I’ll add it to my list. When I fleshed Manny out in my notebook I wrote “Mexican super Mario, but Luigi got all the fame.”
Then took it from there 😂
This really was a fun ride! Love the imagination...
What a unique take and such a fun read! Really enjoyed reading this (as always) :)
Thanks homie! Your new short story was 👌🏽
(AS ALWAYS!!!!!)
Unique my dude! I totally got that inner space vibe right away!
Excellent take my friend! the engine cannae take it!
It reminds me a french tv series, "il était une fois la vie", in a more tragic/funny way ^^
What a cool and imaginative take on the plumbing prompt! I need to show my innards more respect...